Into the third day

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Re: Into the third day

Beitragvon Sinclair » Mittwoch 28. September 2016, 11:54

First, I like your style of writing but there are a few minor improvements to do.

Your usage of commas and semicolons is not completely right.
Your Text woud be more fluent by using some connecting words like therefore, however, as a result, above all and so on.
It also would help if you could make quik notes before you start just to keep track while you write.

I look forward reading some more improved works. :D
Sinclair
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